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The Angel Of Innocence.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 12:39:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Thunder hits,
With lightening blasts,
Marking the grave,
Of the child of the past.
Her lifeless soul,
With be lost for-ever,
But risen by the waves,
With each thunder storm weather.
She and forgotten,
She was drowned by the waves.
And once dead she was pulled under.
NEVER TO BE SEEN AGAIN!
And if you listen very carefully,
You can still hear the cries!
Where the 'angel of innocence'
Defensively died!
Copyright ©
deathdrop
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2004-08-18 12:39:41]
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Re: The Angel Of Innocence.
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by Chade on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:47:46 PM AEST
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Thats a really nice poem. Its kind spooky though and has 101 means ythat can be read into it which is cool.
Chade
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Re: The Angel Of Innocence.
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 05:47:25 PM AEST
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touching write
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Re: The Angel Of Innocence.
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 06:01:48 AM AEST
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Firsty beautiful write, the emotions were definately there.. and secondly thank you for commenting on my poems, it means so much to me. Keep up the good writes.
Love always
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Re: The Angel Of Innocence.
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 12:42:04 PM AEST
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This is beautiful Rosie,
And yes, it is also very sad.
Nice idea.
Great write,
Phil xxx
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