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A Chance Encounter
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:54:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When the doorbell rang that day,
I rush to answer on my way,
A voice that echos "Hello" to me,
Such sweet supple melody.
Why she came I can't remember,
Perhaps some trivia or such another,
But I do know that she was here,
And for a moment I thought that love did appear.
Twin gentle eyes that swings to me,
Joined by a smile that speaks truely,
A picture of heaven stood by and by,
An angel right out from the sky.
Where do I begin and where to start,
As this lovely lady captured my heart,
Long have I waited for this to be,
But long have I feared what it would decree.
For once long before have I felt this way,
Only to know the true meaning of dismay,
What lies beyond this meeting by chance,
Dare I pursue and once again risk to dance.
How can a lady one such a stranger,
Quickened my love with just a whisper,
Why can I still see craddled in stars,
That lovely lady driving off in her car.
A new day hereafter a chance to begin,
Should I risk it ever or dare I abstain,
Rainbows are dancing sunshine is shining,
Old songs of dreams have just begun to sing.
Was it fate or chance encounter,
Is it destiny for me and for her,
I wish I knew and I hope it was,
For my mind is troubled my heart at loss.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2004-08-18 11:54:11]
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Re: A Chance Encounter
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 03:29:51 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this... The title caught my eyes because I have one with the same name..tho it is entirely different and mine is true....
Good write.
Jenni
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Re: A Chance Encounter
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 03:13:23 AM AEST
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Swings both high and low, upon your rhythm. I get the feeling this turned out anti-climactially [sic?] in the end . . . an Interesting and colourfilled poem, Baronhawk.
Keep writing. |
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Re: A Chance Encounter
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 03:16:23 AM AEST
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| Aw, that is a very sweet love poem, lilting and dreamy. I could imagine this very vividly in my head, such was the effect this piece had on me. |
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Re: A Chance Encounter
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by Kie on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 09:42:46 AM AEST
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Packed with emotion. I could feel the energy resonating from inside of you.
Gosh, I wish I had the answers!
Please keep us posted in the future.
I thoroughly enjoyed this and am going to keep you in my prayers and maybe your dreams will come true.
Kie |
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