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My Emotional Explosion!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:25:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Feeling crushed,
Under the rubble.
Where imagination twists,
And bursts all happy bubbles.
Inhaling oxygen.
Polluted by words.
Snapped by low confidence,
I fall straight into the dirt.
Drowning inside my fears.
I find I can't stand.
That, I fall when I try.
And I can't quite grip their hands...
Suffocated by my fears,
I pray to one day, be under-stood.
As I push out my fist,
And ***** from under my hood...
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deathdrop
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2004-08-18 11:25:02]
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Re: My Emotional Explosion!
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by Alina on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:57:04 AM AEST
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I loved this poem! I have also been in foster care and gone through the whole "school" thing and in trouble with the law..... so I know what it is like. Going through foster care and all that bull**** isn't easy so if you ever need somone to talk to just send me a message.
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Re: My Emotional Explosion!
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 06:16:31 AM AEST
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Feelings I can relate to... beautiful write. Never stop writing for I love your work.
love always
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