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Despair
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 10:56:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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dashing hopes
falling tears
despair enfolding
heart shattered
wandering lies
voices raised
stress high
anxiety deep
cold steel
hard barrel
caressing lips
lost eyes
pull trigger
life ends
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MDodgen
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2004-08-18 10:56:17]
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Re: Despair
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by justinblue on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:08:17 AM AEST
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| very good write. Read mine entitled BROKE TRANSMISSION and let me know what tou think |
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Re: Despair
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:27:10 AM AEST
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short, but efective.
don't kill your-self though...
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Re: Despair
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 12:24:55 PM AEST
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:( very heartfelt and deep, filled with sadness
pixie xx
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Re: Despair
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 04:13:34 PM AEST
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Indeed ... short, to the point ... and VERY effective. Wow. Lots of power !!
Nazmythian ~ |
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