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Fury
Contributed by
vicrystal
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Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 08:54:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It bleeds me so, in a thousand ways
To see my folly breed anger’s mess
To be bound by chains of cruel habits
’Tis clear a pain no balm can heal
It bounds me to a fury so untamed
Like a swirling tempest, plunging my might
I’m ridiculed by my anger, forbidden, unsound
Consuming all sense, logic and mind
Too long the pains have others harboured
For my fury resulted in unseemly consequences
The shrieks so unjust, pierced their hearts like knives
Slowly tearing apart the bridges of their love
Could any melody mend their torn souls?
To bring joy to worn out spirits
And if time would turn back to ancient’s past
Would I not refrain from anger’s rush?
’Tis so a torn in my weak and sinful flesh
The fire unsmothered when alight by pride
Oh, if only Will could tame the untamed
Never will I bleed in a thousand ways.
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Re: Fury
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 10:11:54 AM AEST
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| A great emotional write. May you find healing. |
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Re: Fury
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 09:50:12 PM AEST
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| great write .. very emotional .. and i can feel your emotions .. good job ! |
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Re: Fury
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by flamingblade on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 03:51:36 PM AEST
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very deep
can relate hope every gets better
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