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Withering Pasts: A Nostalgia
Contributed by
vicrystal
on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 08:47:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It just seems like yesterday
the schooldays that pass me by too swiftly
a nostalgic pain of yearning to deep
of days of innocence sealed, yet uncrowned
I found too late my wasted past
tainted by fits of agony too dark to embark
the bright days in-between lay unappreciated
Then dimmed to a piercing blackness
Now, i sit in frustration, a sorrow unknown
trying to remember what the withering past was
Knowing what was will forever remain a past
Chained into the darkened pits of memory's last
Thus self rebuke shall i not seek
But to cast my eyes to take a courageous peek
The picture of present, though blurry, unfound
shall be re-painted through the stroke
of reliance's brush.
Copyright ©
vicrystal
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2004-08-18 08:47:22]
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Re: Withering Pasts: A Nostalgia
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by buchi on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 08:19:38 PM AEST
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My kudos to your an insight into the human condition :..I found too late my wasted past
tainted by fits of agony too dark to embark..
Your poem makes people suddenly realize human relevancy is what's important...an ideal poem indeed...
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Re: Withering Pasts: A Nostalgia
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 05:03:52 PM AEST
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| This is a wonderful poem...good job |
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