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Watercolors
Contributed by
jenny21614
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Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 07:53:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Watercolors.
Thrown angrily across an afternoon sky.
A blend of purples, oranges, yellows and blues.
A bleeding rainbow.
Inducing a spark of emotion within,
A bottled memory,
floats out of its prison.
Makes its way down a dark alley,
searching for a breathe of fresh air,
drifting off into the painting.
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jenny21614
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2004-08-18 07:53:33]
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Re: Watercolors
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 09:45:36 AM AEST
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| This might not be your topic Jenny but yyou have delivered a most touching poem. I was so impressed that I have given 5/5 bernard. |
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Re: Watercolors
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 10:57:54 AM AEST
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Just like watercolors do the beauty in this poem blends well and becomes a form of masterpiece. I think this venue suits your perfectly.
Rita |
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Re: Watercolors
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 05:32:47 PM AEST
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It is always good to see experimentation. You never discover the true depths of your imagination if you don't explore with it once in awhile. For not being your normal style ( or for writing out in left field ... as I'm prone to do ... sometimes WAY out there ) this is a very good piece. Vivid images, "...A bottled memory, floats out of its prison " I like that. It is as if a small part of inner torment has been freed.
A good write, explore more !!!!
Nazmythian ~ |
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