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Sleepless Nights
Contributed by
jenny21614
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Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 07:48:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sleepless nights.
Eyes wide open, glazed over with grief.
A blanket of solitude securely tucking me in.
Shadows become a picture book.
A tale of sadness and irony,
Black hearts and faithless souls,
blindly walking, trudging into the fire.
Agony fills my being as I turn over to think,
Inevitably sleep would overcome me.
I would succomb into a world of nightmares.
Trying not to give in,
as one eye slowly closes, making its way into oblivion.
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jenny21614
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2004-08-18 07:48:44]
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Re: Sleepless Nights
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 04:40:00 PM AEST
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Great imagery!
The greif and darkness pour out of this, and yet it almost seems that you are choosing to be alone.
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Re: Sleepless Nights
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 05:37:31 PM AEST
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"A blanket of solitude securely tucking me in.
Shadows become a picture book." Excellent lines. I am visited by memories of empty nights, and sleepless beds. A powerful write. Nice job Jenny
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