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Crying Out In The Dark
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 03:50:00 PM in AEST
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Everything started out so right
I don’t understand how it wrong so fast
The trust and the love is just not there anymore
You seemed to have closed the door
I don’t know what to do I feel like my arms are tied
You just don’t understand that I can’t trust those that lie
You have hurt me many times and I can’t afford to get wounded again
You still mean the world to me but I don’t think it’s meant to be
I have said this over and over and you said it would be fixed
Well here I am again crying out in the dark wondering what happened
You got involved in the wrong crowed and began believing all those lies
I don’t know what to do I love you so much I really do
It seems to me that we are too far apart
That you have lost the vision of me, your sister
I want to fix whatever is in between us
But you won’t talk
I know my anger has been scary
Please don’t just see that
See through the front
The front that I know you can see
You have done it before
Now do it again
Or is it that I don’t want you to?
Maybe that’s why you can’t see
You have hurt me time and time again
I know I have done the same
Can’t you see that I still love you so?
Or are you blinded by my anger?
I want to talk
To get us back to old times
So we can be brother and sister again
Caring for each other and having trust
If that is what you want
Please tell me
If not good bye my sweet brother
I am sorry for the pain.
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lil_angel
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2002-11-01 15:50:00]
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Re: Crying Out In The Dark
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by OreO on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 03:57:09 PM AEST
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This is so sad
I never get to see my brother
but not because we argue
or fight, it's just the way it is
I hope all works out for you
and your brother, it's not
hard to see your pain here
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Crying Out In The Dark
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 07:51:10 PM AEST
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Really sad... I hope it all works out...
Jenni |
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Re: Crying Out In The Dark
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by stephy on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 06:42:23 AM AEST
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| this is really sad and i see there are some issues that run deep... i do hope that things work out for you. |
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Re: Crying Out In The Dark
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 05:16:04 AM AEST
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| A real heart wrencher! I feel your pain through your words. Great one!! Larry |
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Re: Crying Out In The Dark
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 09:31:25 PM AEST
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Emotional write, brought back memories of when I was a real rebal to my entire family, but I remeber hurting my sister alot, because of my nasty mouth.
The wounds I caused back then are slowly healing, but it is still painful to recall them so bluntly.
I hope you and your brother are friends again,
I really enjoyed this poem Keep up the excellent writting. |
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