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gone.
Contributed by
betty
on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 09:51:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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what is to become
of him
alone
in his chair.
he waits
for nothing.
Now that you're
gone.
what is to become
of me
alone
in my bed.
I wait
for the tears.
Now that you're
gone.
what is to become
of you
alone
in your coffin.
you wait
for eternity.
Now that you're
gone.
Copyright ©
betty
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2004-08-17 21:51:26]
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Re: gone.
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 10:05:23 PM AEST
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Mysterious. Made me think for a while.Great Job and keep up the good work!!
Alina |
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Re: gone.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 10:21:45 PM AEST
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| Simple and sad. I though this was a lonely and heartfelt. |
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Re: gone.
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 11:48:59 PM AEST
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Sad but written well.
I'm so sorry for your lost.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy |
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Re: gone.
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by Delusions on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 01:25:49 AM AEST
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| awsome!!! keep it up ~Delusions~ |
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Re: gone.
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by jenny21614 on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 09:12:37 AM AEST
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| Very sad and innocent almost. I like it. Sorry for your loss, always have a positive outlook! xoxo-jen. |
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