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Moving On
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 09:30:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Moving On
I thought this would have been
Something we could've transcended
I'm just proved wrong again
We're too torn to be mended
Walking away from all of this
Not looking back with a glance
I wonder what all we missed
This was all a wasted chance
Forgetting everything in the past
It was something that wouldn't last
I'm moving on with almost nothing
Only with the emotions I have sunk in
This was all a mistake to begin with
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2004-08-17 21:30:42]
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Re: Moving On
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by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 09:42:38 PM AEST
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sometimes it is hard to take those steps to move on, even when knowing it is the right thing to do.
great piece.
the voice
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Re: Moving On
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by Jarmen_Kell on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 10:39:18 PM AEST
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Thesis-Antithesis...
...to synthesis...
Perhaps this is how we begin to grow up.....via "creative destruction" and "orderly chaos".
Your work almost sounds like something I've read. Ever heard of G. W. F. Hegel (1770-1831) before? |
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Re: Moving On
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:45:58 PM AEST
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Maybe it wasn't a mistake, and if it was...it wasn't anyways because it was set there for you to learn off of...I sure did..."everything happens for a reason" I've been hearing that a lot lately and I'm definetly starting to believe it...awesome peom by the way!
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