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Mirror Image
Contributed by
UnfallenTears
on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:53:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Past the mirror image
A heart silently breaks
Past dreams lie, buried by time
And memories of regretted mistakes
The mirror lies
Holding a backward reflection
A heart beats on the right
While keeping rhythm with imperfection
Past the mirror image
A soul starved for satisfaction
And unfallen tears gather
Flooding out the sanity of reaction
Not reflected in the mirror
Lying broken and discouraged
If you seek truth beyond the reflection
Look past the mirror image
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UnfallenTears
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2004-08-17 20:53:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Mirror Image
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 09:37:43 PM AEST (User
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i see the reflection in the mirror that does not tell the tale
of the wonderful person who has traveled through a terrible hell
if there was a way to bring light to their life
i would endure a part of their strife
loved the write. let em know if you need to chat.
the voice
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Re: Mirror Image
(User Rating: 1 ) by betty on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 10:02:25 PM AEST (User
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very nice write. |
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Re: Mirror Image
(User Rating: 1 ) by blueheart on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 06:26:29 AM AEST (User
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I was drawn to the poem because I have a poem that has the same title. This was a brilliant piece, I'm so glad I managed to read it. :) |
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Re: Mirror Image
(User Rating: 1 ) by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 07:25:00 AM AEST (User
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nice poem i like the use of words xgripx |
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