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A helping hand
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:15:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I cant tell you what im feeling
this void I have inside
everyday I feel like less
like another part of me died
my look of desperation
is apparent to those around
yet they offer nothing to me
they only cast thier frowns
disappointment in my failures
but never a helping hand
I cant do it by myself
on my own I cannot stand
I try to always do whats right
even when it leaves me wronged
I give to those who are weaker
all I can to make them strong
but in return nothing is given
for helping with thier life
they only turn thier backs on me
when it my turn to face the strife
I dont think I ask for that much
the one and only thing I yearn
maybe one day I can have
a helping hand in return
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Re: A helping hand
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by ps_ihateyou on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:32:18 PM AEST
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| i know exactly how you feel. if you ever wanna talk...i'm here. |
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Re: A helping hand
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by MDodgen on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 09:22:57 PM AEST
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| I this isn't pertaining to me, i will always be there for you honey. no matter what. it's us against the world. |
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Re: A helping hand
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by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 09:24:39 PM AEST
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my hand i hold out if only you will reach
i offer my help, promising not to preach
if you see my back to you i have turned
it is only so you can climb upon and take the ride you have earned.....
great write. my door is always open
the voice
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Re: A helping hand
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 07:57:13 PM AEST
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Include me, holder, with the others here that are there for you. Really.
You've expressed yourself well... I'd say it's a good write, with good flow, etc.... but that seems trivial somehow. Instead, I'll simply say: I do very much hope that from this day forward... you feel like more and more and more... and hope that you know I mean it.
Knowing it's not always easy, but convinced that it's worth it,
SNM
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Re: A helping hand
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 02:20:35 AM AEST
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you have done once again...holder and it never seems to surprise me...I liked this write again your feelings and emotions flowed through...
much love,
Dani |
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