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Contributed by
rugby_player
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Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:13:11 PM in AEST
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It amazes me
To think
Think that after 21 years it must all come to an end in 6 months
There is still so much i want to do
But yet there is so much i don't want to do
Maybe it won't be so bad
I will no longer have to worry about being perfect
I don't have to worry about my pain
I don't have to worry about not being able to sleep
All my fears have stopped
Because now i have a much bigger fear
One that all of us have to face at somepoint
Others sooner
Others later
For me it comes in 6 months
When my breathing will stop
My heart will stop beating
My brain will stop sending messeges
Blood will no longer flow
My veins will dry out
My lungs will be empty
For i will be dead in 6 months
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Re: 6
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:17:11 PM AEST
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| Im sorry to hear about that... I can only say live it up as much as you can. I will keep you in my prayers and im here if you ever need someone to chat to... heartwrenching poem elegantly written. A++++ |
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by punkprincess6689 on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 09:50:31 PM AEST
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| im sorry to hear that. i hope some miricle will happen and u will live longer. the poem is good also |
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Re: 6
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 10:14:14 PM AEST
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I honestly don't know what to say!! Great but Tragic poem. I don't know if you are giving yourself 6 months if you're contemplating suicide or if because you're medically ill. Either way, everything happens for a reason and we all have our own time. All people can tell you is that their sorry and those comments seemed with no concern. I can't truely say I am sorry to you because sorry means remorse...... and I have no remorse for I've done nothing wrong. But I can say that I am someone you can talk to honestly and will try to give you the best of my knowledge if needed. On the brightest sied of things..... live with no regrets, live to your fullest and look forward to walking beside GOD. DEATH SHOULD NOT BE FEARED FOR THE AFTERLIFE ISFAR MORE WONDERFUL!!!!!!
May Peace and Love be with you always.
Alina
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Re: 6
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 12:23:33 AM AEST
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This is so sad but written well.
I believe in miracles so please don't give up hope.
I've faced death maney times in my life but God always gave me the choice to hang in here or give up.
I will put u in my prayers so please hang in there.
Luv, huggs, prayer, strength, peace,
emystar@msn.com |
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Re: 6
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by jenny21614 on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 09:18:02 AM AEST
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I'am so sorry. This poem sparks a lot of emotion in me because my brother died at the age of 24 from a terminal illness. All i can say is leave each day to the fullest and be so thankful for the time you've been given. Use your time to make a difference in the world sumhow, even the smallest thing might mean the world to one person. If you ever need to talk or nething you can email me at jenny21614@yahoo.com or IM me at jenny21614. Keep your head up!! Keep smiling, dont let this over come you!!!
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Re: 6
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by MDodgen on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:00:20 AM AEST
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such an emotional poem. i'm really sorry to hear about this. like everyone else said, just life each day as if it were your last and you will be happy in the end. hugs and kisses
mel |
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Re: 6
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 09:21:09 PM AEST
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ok, now I dont like the MEANING of the poem...and you know why...I dont plan on losing you...your my best friend, so I plan on having you be at my wedding and all those great things even IM looking forward to in life...and I want you to look forward to things in life...because your not leaving me in 6 months...your not...because I say so...ok well I really have no say in when you leave this earth...but I do have a say in whether I want you to or not...and I want you to stay here and be the one I can talk to...you know...your like a dad to me...because my dad is never there and neither is my mom...you really need to keep your head held high...and do what I said...FREEZE.... ok??? jeez I really dont like this poem...but it did I will say it came together good...but still the meaning SUCKS!!!! I love you...ok...
much love, and always here...
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