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sensibility
Contributed by
tawakwan
on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:10:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The walls surrounding my heart
are mammoth in size.
My mind takes on the characteristics of a dreidel
as it spins deeper into confusion.
I watch as the leaves change color.
I feel summer turn to winter,
Feel?
Dull,Dense,Dying.
Society continues it's march into madness.
The crazed days of depression alter
my train of thought.
The search for freedom leads to
black hole resolutions
Runaway emotions form an army of tears.
Then slowly
I become one with time
Syncronized.Ticking away.
Winding down...
Copyright ©
tawakwan
... [
2004-08-17 20:10:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: sensibility
(User Rating: 1 ) by ps_ihateyou on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:35:56 PM AEST (User
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i loved this. great job. :) |
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Re: sensibility
(User Rating: 1 ) by buchi on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 08:53:45 PM AEST (User
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Runaway emotions form an army of tears.
How poignant...simple yet stirring...keep it coming.
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