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no end
Contributed by
Merry
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Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 07:20:08 PM in AEST
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thinking there is no end, a mistake i often make -
reason tends to flee when my heart takes over
where my head used to be - can't stop smiling
or crying when you hang up the phone
i want you - like i have not wanted anyone
in such a very long time
we talk in abstracts - places we've never been
when we meet in the middle of the airport
when we swim naked in the sea
i can hear something in your voice now
that wasn't there before
truth - we are in love
truth - we never saw it coming
truth - it might be scary
everything we have ever known
is suddenly different
the sound of your voice
my laughter sounds girlish
your words keep me alive
hope rides the wind - singing its song
we tell each other - someday babe, someday
thinking there is no end, a mistake i often make......
Copyright ©
Merry
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2004-08-17 19:20:08]
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Re: no end
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 07:45:50 PM AEST
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Great writing, my friend. One can feel the magic of luv.
luv, huggs, smiles |
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Re: no end
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 07:48:40 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. I have never expirienced these memories before. |
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Re: no end
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by UnfallenTears on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:27:27 PM AEST
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| Good write, it conveys a lot of feeling. I like your descriptions. Amazing job |
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Re: no end
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by Biker on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:38:48 AM AEST
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Such a heart touching experience..... sounds familiar Merry. -Keep smiling -
r r |
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Re: no end
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:11:39 PM AEST
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Yes, more great writing. Some day? Do you still dream of some day? Is some day real or just an incredible fantasy...dripping with too much color to ever be put away completely?Oh, sorry. I could ramble on and on with this one. You have said it perfectly once again.
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Re: no end
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by tormentedpixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:30:24 PM AEST
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| loved it! I'm still dreaming... waiting for that one day. Hoping it will come soon. keep up the good work. ^_^ |
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Re: no end
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by tormentedpixie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:31:16 PM AEST
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| loved it! I'm still dreaming... waiting for that one day. Hoping it will come soon. keep up the good work. ^_^ |
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