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I Let Him Go
Contributed by
2ndChance
on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 05:28:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He packs his bag,
no tears upon his face.
"We had a good long run" he'd say,
if this was only a game.
My heart aches for him,
yearns for it to be just a dream...
I know he'd never be happy here,
that's why I created a lie...
to drive him away,
and into the arms of another.
And so,
crying at the door,
I watch the only man that could make me smile,
vanish into the night.
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2ndChance
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2004-08-17 17:28:08]
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Re: I Let Him Go
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 05:36:11 PM AEST
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I'd say both, you love him but you are afraid it won't work out.
This draws me in...great write! |
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Re: I Let Him Go
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by punkprincess6689 on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 09:54:44 PM AEST
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| i think both cuz maybe u were afraid u luved him and u didnt wanna get hurt but eitther way u ended up hurt. this is just what i think. |
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Re: I Let Him Go
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 12:53:45 AM AEST
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Both. You love him so much you are afriad of harming him.
Great poem thee. |
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