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sleepless
Contributed by
pastiche247
on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 04:37:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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sleepless: he sits at the edge of the bed
and worries.
the days of scribbling dreams
are coming to an end
in those last and curious hours when
flamboyant life retreats,
running from the structure
of falling jungle trees -
when paradise is captured
and the princess is released
and the ordinary soldiers are
simply turned away.
he sits without coughing
sleepless: in darkness, no words.
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pastiche247
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2004-08-17 16:37:47]
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Re: sleepless
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 05:43:37 PM AEST
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You bring a new perspective to insomnia!
Very insightful. Thank you. |
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Re: sleepless
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 06:17:17 PM AEST
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| This is very vivid, I suffer from insomnia alot so this appeals to me. |
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Re: sleepless
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by brew on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 07:21:23 PM AEST
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| Can say I know how that feels....I sleep, but not much.and when I do its not a sound , sleep EVER! Maybe one day .huh?! Good write! |
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