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Suicide's whore...
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 04:10:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Forever in the darkness,
Always meant to be alone...
There isn't a god up there...
Why did I start believing?
I thought I found hope,
But all I found was Death again...
Death, my sanctuary...
My solace...
Taking the pain away,
Letting it flow...
Creating a pool of crimson around me...
Nothing can take me back...
I have made my decision...
I let everything in...
All the pain, the sorrow, the hate, and anger...
My heart withers away,
My soul is lost in the stomach of eternity...
Temptation mocks me...
All feelings have vanished..
And I am left with my slow, deteriorating heart...
Ticking, ticking away...
I don't care anymore...
Nothing fazes me...
All I feel is never ending hate...
To that revolting thing called my father...
Hell is where I will go...
I'm not an angel when I die...
Forever bound to Life's pain...
Anguish envelops my life once more,
And I turn to Suicide for comfort,
My last selfish wish..
I am Suicide's whore...
Death's eternal lover...
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2004-08-17 16:10:03]
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Re: Suicide's whore...
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 04:33:43 PM AEST
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Sorry for all the pain and suffering.
Someone who can capture feelings in this form should does not deserve emptiness
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Re: Suicide's whore...
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 05:19:00 PM AEST
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You wrote this poem in perfect words. BUT..... you are only "Suicides Whore" if you let yourself be one. If delt with depression and suicide many times before in my life..... and your life is what YOU MAKE IT OUT to be.!!Yes, I yunderstand that loved ones do, do things to us and can hurt us very much.... but we as human beings are the ones who decide how we are going to let it effect us. You can take your hate and negativity towards your father and learn from it not to become like he is. Your father will never change..... but you can change your soorows into joy's. LIFE IS WHAT YOU MAKE IT.
With Care and Concern,
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Re: Suicide's whore...
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by saveMEfromMYSELF on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 06:27:44 PM AEST
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Nice poem. You probably don't want a lecture on how 'suicide is not the answer', so you won't get one from me. I've been there before, mate..... back to the point.... very good. VERY good.
Good luck to you!
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Re: Suicide's whore...
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:08:04 PM AEST
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this is so sad... I wish I knew what to say.
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Re: Suicide's whore...
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by CrimsonTears on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 11:29:01 PM AEST
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this is so sad...but your words show power....be strong....great write
Lots of Love
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Re: Suicide's whore...
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by allymp on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 05:19:00 PM AEST
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Don't take your life away...it's not worthe it...life is sometimes hard but thats what makes it great...
nice write
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Re: Suicide's whore...
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:49:55 AM AEST
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fleur précieuse de sang,
I ache for a way to take this pain from you. To carry it's weight on my shoulders so you won't be burdened with it further. I wish that I could cleave it from your heart and spirit.
I read of "Hope" yesterday, he's still out there. Still searching for someone to believe in, who will believe in him. It is possible that hope resides in more than just one man. I wish ... Je pourrais vous affecter.
Nazmythian ~ |
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