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The Ultimate Paradox
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:24:22 PM in AEST
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Here, but gone
And back again
Endless but finite
Hated yet desired
Too much
Too little
Too late ...
Tomorrow
Measured
Misunderstood
Misused ...
Missed opportunity
Saved
Spent
Secret
Slipping by ...
Time
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
... [
2004-08-17 15:24:22]
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Re: The Ultimate Paradox
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:45:09 PM AEST
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| Very well done. This is superbly written. Very basic concept and formed turned into a plentiful message. I loved it! |
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Re: The Ultimate Paradox
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 05:06:21 PM AEST
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| I love how this fell out, and how nicely it reads. well done. |
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Re: The Ultimate Paradox
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by Lone_er on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 06:00:12 PM AEST
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| powerful.. well done.....Russ |
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Re: The Ultimate Paradox
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by critterhideaway on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:46:46 AM AEST
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| Ahhh! yes time, do we wver have enough and do we use it effeciently, I think not |
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Re: The Ultimate Paradox
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 02:50:22 PM AEST
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That was incredible! Short, yet it struck a chord. Ah, such is time, no? It flies by when you don't expect it... And yet, it creeps ever so slowly when you're in the utmost pain... I can relate to this... Beautiful submission, mon ami! I loved it! Forever yours,
Votre plus chère fleur |
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