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One more touch... One more kiss...
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:14:44 PM in AEST
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My world has ended again…
You are the creator of Fatality…
Your greedy hands touch me once more,
My purity is lost…
This feeling of disgust towards you…
“You’re so soft…”
Your malignant tongue whispers in my ear…
I want to kill you,
Rip off those hands of yours…
Make everyday of your life a living Hell…
Like you have made mine…
You give and you give,
But you can’t receive…
You bastard,
Look at what you’ve done to me…
Your lips force themselves on mine,
And you spread your disease into me…
I am contaminated with your perverted toxic…
I never knew this would come out of you…
Ravenous desire and lust roar in your hazel eyes,
You lick your lips hungrily,
As if a wild animal…
My forced hand travels along your body,
You stop it right at your source…
You make me stroke it,
Sighs escaping your lips…
I’m gagging on my suppressed revulsion…
“Tell me you love me…”
Moaning, bucking under my touch…
My mouth goes dry,
Tears spill…
I don’t want to!
I hate you!
Go away!
Die! I scream inside my head….
But I can’t fight him…
I part my trembling lips,
The salty droplets cascading down into my throat…
“I…I love you, Daddy…”
An evil smile forms,
Your eyes twinkle with satisfaction…
“Good girl… You’re my good little girl…”
You plant a hard kiss on my lips,
And leave me in the darkness,
For me to bask in my insanity and sadness…
I hate what you do to me…
But I can’t fight you…
I don’t have the strength or the will to…
Drowning in an ocean of my tears,
All that goes through my fevered mind is,
“I’m a good girl… I’m Daddy’s good little girl…”
And all goes black…
I have finally found peace…
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FleurdeSang
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2004-08-17 15:14:44]
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Re: One more touch... One more kiss...
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by Ms_superior on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:20:56 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. You have a great way of expressing yourself on paper. It is unforutnate that this has happened to you. Keep your head up and never forget who's up there. |
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Re: One more touch... One more kiss...
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:35:07 PM AEST
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you're a really good writter
it' terrible that this happened to you
i hope it's over now
i'm glad you have a creative outlet for pain... you never realize how much it helps until you lose it
i hope you never lose yours |
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Re: One more touch... One more kiss...
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:39:32 PM AEST
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A very powerful poem. Filled with raw emotion. I can not relate to the situation. I will never understand. My heartstrings have just been yanked. I pray you will find that peace, and live to truly enjoy it.
Nazmythian ~
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Re: One more touch... One more kiss...
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by Sagacious on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 04:02:08 PM AEST
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As you know, I have insight which makes this all the more revolting to me, all the more immediate and real. I can't comment in the depth that I want to, but I think you have gone a long way toward achieving your freedom. I do understand better, now, and I do feel that hatred toward him that you have felt for a long time. I still believe some good can come from even the darkest emotion, but it does take time. Through it all,
Always Your Friend,
Kris |
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Re: One more touch... One more kiss...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 05:10:54 PM AEST
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Woah - wanted to back out of the room and pretend I didn't read this. Pwerful and ugly and I just wish this never had to be written about, because it is such a tragedy that it happens at all.
sorry for the pain and sickened that it had to happen |
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Re: One more touch... One more kiss...
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by jenny21614 on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 09:23:38 AM AEST
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Thanks for sharing. Its things like this that really make you think about life and the stupid decisions some people make. I'm sorry that this had to happen to u, dont let it overpower you, let it make you a better person. Stand up and help others that have been in your situation! Great write. You're a fabulous writer.
xoxo-jen. |
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