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Heart To Heart
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 02:27:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We had a little heart to heart,
After a row had played it’s part,
Lay on the bed side by side,
I talked of feelings that I normally hide.
We held each other near,
Inside our hearts was the fear,
Our hearts are made of delicate glass,
Takes awhile for the hurt to pass.
In your eyes I saw great pain,
I knew I’d made you hurt again,
Wish I could crawl inside you,
& make your heart feel so brand new.
Your heart had the wrong kind of beating,
It received another unhappy greeting,
Your heart is breakable I should remember,
From January right through to December.
When we row it feels like hell,
As tears & upset inside you & I well,
I hate arguing with my special man,
I will make it up the best way I can.
I am the only one who has the key,
To either break your heart or set it free,
I’m glad we had our heart to heart,
You & I are destined never to part.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-08-17 14:27:10]
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Re: Heart To Heart
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by paula_kay23 on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 02:47:28 PM AEST
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aww very sweet, i enjoyed reading this, i especially liked how you layed your self bare after saying you normally hide feelings,
well done
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Re: Heart To Heart
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 03:55:22 PM AEST
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I really loved the ending to this
"You and I are destined never to part"
There is a true love here that flows like the strongest river......may you always have that
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Re: Heart To Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 09:28:34 PM AEST
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awwww, so sweetly sincere, and beautifully warm, may you always have happiness:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
p.s. i promise to catch up on your poetry soon!! |
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Re: Heart To Heart
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by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 01:13:13 PM AEST
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Those heart to hearts are what keep a relationship healthy. Great poem. Emotions freely and beautifully expressed.
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