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Happy Death
Contributed by
Ryoko
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Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 02:16:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i don't fear none of my enemies,
i don't fear your mental attack,
i wish when i saw you i wouldn't remember,
All that made me and scared me.
Permanent coping etching denial,
believing all i conjure up,
detailed memory of all thats happened,
All thats come i forget.
Families pressuring vice grip,
tightened around my waist,
squeezing my lungs upwards,
empty stomach forever dull.
Black velvet clouds my purple heart,
One step closer to darkness,
seeping slowly into my veins,
rushing towards my depthless soul.
it feels like sarin's work,
a slow but eventual illness,
Pupils close of my sight to the world,
And happiness fills my death.
Copyright ©
Ryoko
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2004-08-17 14:16:08]
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Re: Happy Death
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 02:20:57 PM AEST
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a great imaginative dark poem,
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Re: Happy Death
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by paula_kay23 on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 02:35:11 PM AEST
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the first couple of verses in this remind me of a rough time i went through.
very dark, i enjoyed reading
paulax |
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