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Mirror
Contributed by
Bloodthirsty
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Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 01:27:02 PM in AEST
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Mirror mirror on the wall
I am worthless after all
Watching the world around me fall
How can I survive when I feel so small?
Mirror mirror show me please
The person I was ment to be
Im falling apart
I want to see
The real person inside of me
Mirror mirror tell me true
Who is it I see when I look into you
That cant be who I am! That cant be true
Mirror mirror what will I do?
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Re: Mirror
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:25:57 AM AEST
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This is excellent.. I really love the flow of it....
Hope all is well with you...
Jenni |
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Re: Mirror
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 12:57:28 AM AEST
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It started out really great. It flowed so well, I dint really care for the ending tho. I think you can do quite a bit better. Otherwise though I mean wow good job!!
I'm sorry you feel so bad though. I know what it likes to be so insecure and lost in urself. Its not a good feeling at all. :( Keep ur chin up. |
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