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Spring
Contributed by
Kylevg
on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 12:16:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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1st September
is when spring starts
I never forget to remember.
Trees and flowers starts growing
and rivers stop flowing.
1st of September, I love that day
no one could ever chase it away.
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Kylevg
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2004-08-17 12:16:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Spring
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stoney1 on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 05:59:49 AM AEST (User
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...and rivers stop flowing... that doesn't make sense. Rivers don't stop flowing in Spring. If anything, they are overflowing their banks due to the run-off of ice and snow melting.
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