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Back To You
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 12:04:37 PM in AEST
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SongLyrics
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Well
I'm sorry, I just picked up the phone
And my fingers started doin'
A little walkin' of their own
And before I knew it
They'd gone and placed this call
Now
I hear your voice on the end of the line
Askin' me what it is I want this time
And to tell you the truth
I ain't got a clue at all
( Chorus )
But sometimes ~
I think about you
And I swear I've lost my mind
And it seems to me whenever it leaves
It comes back with your memory right behind
I don't know what I'm gonna do
But honey to tell the truth
I'd race my heart against my mind
If I thought it'd bring me back to you
( instrumental break )
No
I don't know what I'm doin'
Parked here in your drive
Me and some buddies went out
For a drink last night
I can't recall what time I left that bar
But
It seems to me about half past ten
When the juke box played our song again
That's when my mind up and left me
But I never thought it'd take me this far
( Chorus )
And sometimes ~
I think about you
And I swear I've lost my mind
And it seems to me whenever it leaves
It comes back with your memory right behind
I don't know what I'm gonna do
But honey to tell the truth
I'd race my heart against my mind
If I thought it'd bring me back to you
( instrumental break )
( repeat chorus )
( end )
Note ~ I kinda hear a Randy Travis voice here with a Sawyer Brown, The Race Is On beat.
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Re: Back To You
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 11:26:53 PM AEST
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I can hear the beat Naz, and the tune, the singers, and words that bring that make the room! This is a marvelous song.....turn it in, turn it in.......turn it in!
Great!
Love
consue,
and thanks so much Naz for you kind comments on my poems.
They are greatly appreciated!!! |
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Re: Back To You
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 07:49:59 PM AEST
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Hi Naz,
I choose this read because it got fewer reads and comments then most of your other works. It sounds like a fun song, and again your versatility. My other agenda was to try and figure out what seems to detemine whether a poem gets read a lot. My last one did very poorly in terms of the number of reads.
I continue to enjoy your works, my friend
Willofree |
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Re: Back To You
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:26:54 PM AEST
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You are a very interesting writer... this is why I like rummaging thru older and less read poems. I liked the lyrics. Cool stuff, Nazzy.
--Mothy |
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Re: Back To You
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by critterhideaway on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:55:15 AM AEST
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| I like this song, I guess because country and western is my favorite music. I think youre right, you should send it to Randy Travis, he'd probably sing it. Very good, thanks!! |
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Re: Back To You
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by FleurdeSang on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 03:33:38 PM AEST
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Satisfyingly beautiful and sweet... A very good cowboy drinking song, I approve! As being a country music lover myself, I love this 'song'! Excellent write, gorgeous flow! Truly perfect!! It was a wonderful 'break-up, drinking' song! Melancholic at some parts, but that's what makes it so good. BRAVO! ENCORE! Heart-wrenching and incredibly enchanting till the very end! You're very talented, my dearest Naz. It will surely take you places. I enjoyed this very much, I thank you for sharing it! All my love. Eternally yours,
Votre douce fleur de sang |
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Re: Back To You
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by Lee on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 06:29:12 AM AEST
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Poet at Industrial Colosseums Unbound
Says:
Woinderfully themed poem!
A bright and shining gem!
Jolly Good Show! |
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