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Last Years Model
Contributed by
Bloodthirsty
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Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 11:50:11 AM in AEST
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He has shipped in for a replacement
I guess I'm last years model
He keeps me in the basement
Along with his collection of empty beer bottles
I havnt seen her yet
But i bet she is pretty
Bet he does her every chance he gets
Last years model wasnt programed that way
What a pitty
I bet she is better than I ever was
Bet he loves everything she ever does
Of course she is better than me
Im last years model
Thats why Im here in the basement
Staring at his collection of empty beer bottles
Last years model doesnt drink
Doesnt do drugs or smoke
She does all of that I think
I guess my liscence to love has been revoked
I guess being replaced isnt so bad
You just lose everything that you ever had
My will to love has sumwhat faded
And now I wonder why I was ever created
It doesnt matter now
My warranty is at an end
And I guess I am what you would call
A disposable girlfriend
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Re: Last Years Model
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 11:56:18 AM AEST
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| Like the concept of this. Well, but you deserve better than someone who treats people as disposable. |
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Re: Last Years Model
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 02:26:13 PM AEST
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That is very well written, and thought out. A disposable girlfriend ? No ... just an another underinformed, idiot consumer.
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Re: Last Years Model
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:33:37 AM AEST
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This is very interesting...... lovely concept...
Jenni |
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Re: Last Years Model
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by buchi on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 08:07:19 PM AEST
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| Very depictive...aptly titled and sublime...A great poem...keep them coming... |
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