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Why
Contributed by
fallin_angel_lover
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 10:14:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Why now?
Why at the last possible moment
Must you entertain me
When you're dating my best friend?
Why me?
Why must you touch me
Make me smile and laugh
Make me feel like I have never before
When you're dating my best friend?
Why?
Why must all guys
Who seem to be interested in me
And make me like them
Why must they be dating my best friend?
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2004-08-16 22:14:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Why
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 10:35:48 PM AEST (User
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I am usually not a big fan of contemporary flow and wording within modern poetry. Here, however it works. It works as a slight modern masterpiece of simplicity. Great Job! |
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