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forgotten
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 09:50:31 PM in AEST
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How do i feel,now that i know you are real,
why couldnt i see whats before me/
what do you save instore for me?
when i was lost to you was i forgotten?
when i screamed with my soul you were lost,
my soul died deselate in the frost.
simple as it always could be after all you are forgotten to me.
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Re: forgotten
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by AspenGlow on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:13:08 AM AEST
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Have felt like this many times, there is a poem I have on my wall for those times when I feel so lost and alone.......please read the poem...
Foot Prints.
It gets me through some dark nights be they sunlite or moonlite.
Chris
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Re: forgotten
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 01:13:53 PM AEST
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thanking you so much Brittany for stopping by and reading my poetry!
This is a wonderful poem, how many times how we all at some time felt we were forgotten by Him, but when a God has all the hairs on your head numbered, and loves you so much he gave His Son for you.....you can be assured.............He will never forget you!
You were right I loved this poem!
And since I've not had the privilege before, WELCOME TO YPDC.........YOU'LL LOVE IT HERE!!!!KEEP COMMENTING SO WE CAN ALL GET TO KNOW YOU!!!!
Warm hugs and more hugs.......
I'll love you lots if you need attention......
Lovingcritters (I love poets more!)
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