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150 days since you left
Contributed by
8kiwi8
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 09:26:39 PM in AEST
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How long have you been gone?
one day,another day...
Seems too long to have ever have been
another day,another day...
I feel ashamed to say i'm forgetting
another day,another day...
Pictures and memories clear as diamond in my mind
another day,another day...
However, remembering the feeling, the zest of being with you
another day,another day...
Is slowly and slowly and slowly letting go
another day,another day...
If only i could spend just one more day with you, to renew the feeling
another day,another day...
It hasn't been that long,not long enough to say goodbye
another day,another day...
The only time i'll be ready to say goodbye,will be the time when i can receive a goodbye in return
another day,another day...
I'll just have to wait, and wait, and wait
another day,another day...
That's going to be a long wait.
another day,another day...
how far am i? not long to go,right? I've got quite far!
another day,another day...
one...two...three...four...five...six...seven...eight...
each ... lasts a thousand years when you're in my thoughts
what's one hundred and fifty times a thousand years?
that's how long you've been gone
and how many more of those have i to wait
to renew that feeling of ours?
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8kiwi8
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Re: 150 days since you left
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by recklessguy on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 12:08:51 AM AEST
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I didnt think anyone thought on the same wave I did super write
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Re: 150 days since you left
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by 8kiwi8 on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 07:26:46 AM AEST
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thanks:-)its not as good as 'gone forever' (my first one about chloe) but i keep wanting to write more n more about her. awwww,have you lost someone too? i'm sorry.
thanks again, kiwiii x x x x |
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