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I'm almost gone

Contributed by lovelybones on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 09:14:53 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

i may have you baby
but she still beat me
cuz even tho your mine
she's got 50% of me

i wanna bealive that everything is alrite
i wanna mistake my emptiness for a small attention cry
could you please call me and make sure im okay
theres a problem with me today
she recently took my brain and told my heart to run away

she could take all my money
and take all my books
she could crush down my IQ
and steal my good looks
yet theres one thing shes taken
that you promised i'd get first
and since i gave you mine
what i expected happened at it's worst

now shes got my eye balls cuz she sets them to cry
shes got my heart too, and i feel her kicking me from inside
shes taken my hand and hair
cuz i caught her pulling some out
and now shes got my lungs
cuz shes sucking the air out

im almost all the way gone
and theres nothing she can't take
shes even in my nightmares and laughs as i wake
she's the one who puts the razor to my arm
she forces me to sit there and cause myself harm
she's taken my sanity and drove me insane
shes laughing outloud, as i sit in pain.

Copyright © lovelybones ... [ 2004-08-16 21:14:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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