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Shelf With The Lost
Contributed by
Luka
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 09:04:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The lost and the used
the abused and the bruised
a mix that leaves you confused
a life his family refused
he boozed and he used
it's just another tale
of some poor man's trail
just another story
on the shelf with the lost
a life gone without a cost
Copyright ©
Luka
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2004-08-16 21:04:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Shelf With The Lost
(User Rating: 1 ) by neglected1 on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 07:11:43 PM AEST (User
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this is very sad.. i hope this isnt about you... or anybody you know.. and if it is i wish the best of luck to you... you rhyme very well... very clean and crisp.. you have a unique style of writing which is very refreshing..
again, well done
~neglected1~
(YAY im the first one to comment on this one... im honored) |
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