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The Scholars
Contributed by
Archie
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 07:00:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Plaintive cries misguide the soul
unto an evil yet unknown
Sorrow quenches all his dreams
causing great enmity
Constant searching in the dark;
constant stumping of the heart.
Exalted pleasures look like light
Luminous lurid heinous plight
Truth so close the soul can't feel it
This can not be comprehended
Sorrowful chiding, blanketing curse
Fate from knowledge is much worse
We know so much it makes us damned
The tree we ate of doppelgangs
until the truth can not be found
and wicked mercies do abound
We've all become the scolded scholars
with out knowledge that empowers
caught in a curse that will not end
unless our truth uncomprehends
Misguided fools who must aknowledge
that we need help to find who God is.
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-08-16 19:00:48]
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Re: The Scholars
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 08:21:35 PM AEST
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This was one GREAT write, such powerful words that just seemed to flow into the reader. I am so humbled to read your work.
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Re: The Scholars
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by Stitch on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 09:20:10 PM AEST
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Bravo! Bravo! I REALLY like this! A VERY impressive write.
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Re: The Scholars
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 01:29:50 PM AEST
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Excellent a fabulous write Archie
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Re: The Scholars
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by venkat on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 04:43:21 AM AEST
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Even your verse is beautifully rhythmic..
this is powered with wisdom..conclusion
is also captivating.. venkat |
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Re: The Scholars
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 12:27:35 AM AEST
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Excellent write on the basic human. love and peace.
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Re: The Scholars
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 12:52:53 AM AEST
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Yeh, I feel ya in this one.
Good work.
luv, huggs, smy
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Re: The Scholars
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 12:53:54 AM AEST
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sorry, my fingers went nuts and didn't mind the brain.
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