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Wonders
Contributed by
gina
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Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 11:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Have you ever wondered what a day would be like without a sun
have u ever needed something but couldn't make it done
Have you ever tried to follow but lost the track
got stuck in a hollow with no turn back
Have you ever layed on the grass open armed and closed your eyes
fighting memories in which a part of you slowly dies
Have you ever pretended enjoying your time,
having fun..when nothing works fine
Have you ever hid your pain behind a fake smile
holding tears from flowing for long long time
If u dont then watch me laugh
and if you listen, you could hear my cry
where is he!?my missing half
what i show is just a lie
Copyright ©
gina
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2002-11-01 11:15:00]
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Re: Wonders
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:45:37 PM AEST
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Great write! Yes I have wondered this, and have done some of it too so I know! Christina
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Re: Wonders
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by OreO on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:55:10 PM AEST
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Ok how do you know me?
I'm just kidden, but i've been
here before, maybe i still am
there lol..Great write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Wonders
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by Opium on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 01:33:27 AM AEST
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| You describe a very living example that we all have experienced, good writing Gina. |
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Re: Wonders
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by Tyes on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 09:29:20 PM AEST
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An extremely beautiful piece !
Keep it coming |
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