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°°°Taste Of Eternity°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 10:50:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Come play with me, open up and share
Your beautiful soul that you hide
Don't be afraid that your in a nightmare
I'll take you on true loves ride
*
I'll take your pain and wrap it up
And carry it on my eternal soul
If you still beleive in my true love
Then tell me this, i need to know
*
I'll brush your face with my soft skin
And slide my warm lips across your eyes
I know you don't want this road again
Let me heal you, I'll give you no lies
*
I'll give eskimo kisses, gentle and kind
I'm not scared to let the world see
I'll slide my finger tips down your spine
And comfort your warm body into me
*
I'll bite your lip and taste your passion
Slide my leg right in between yours
I wear you on me, you'll be my fashion
And our hearts together will pour
*
I'll lick your lips and inhale your breath
To the very inner core of my soul
I'll love you eternally, until my death
Until then we can live and grow old
*
I'll kiss that spot that drives you wild
I'll explore every part of your flesh
I'll be gentle, i'll be soft and mild
And listen to you moan, oh yes
*
Your skin i'll taste, i'll feel, and suck
Your quivering i'll soak into my soul
I'll be your charm, and your good luck
It's our journey, baby let's go
*
Don't be afraid to let your feelings fly
True love i will die to find
If your out their somewhere, do not hide
Don't sit like a fool and be blind
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-11-01 10:50:00]
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Re: °°°Taste Of Eternity°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 01:49:12 PM AEST
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| WWWoooo Oreo I got in to the heat of the passion in this poetry,Very hot n' heavy!Very good write!Christina |
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Re: °°°Taste Of Eternity°°°
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 11:19:49 PM AEST
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Awesome write OreO
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Re: °°°Taste Of Eternity°°°
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by SA_RA on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 01:50:33 AM AEST
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| Very good love poem..which I like mostly. |
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Re: °°°Taste Of Eternity°°°
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by MisterRight on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 09:15:07 AM AEST
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What a wide range of emotions that one put me through! Great job.
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Re: °°°Taste Of Eternity°°°
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 07:54:22 AM AEST
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| what does this have to do with eternity? |
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Re: °°°Taste Of Eternity°°°
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by LostDream on
Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 02:34:13 PM AEST
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Really hot......:-)) wonderful write!!!Thanx for posting comments to my poems!!!Keep on writing!
Sara |
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