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tipsy
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 01:06:09 PM in AEST
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i can feel it rushing down my kneck
i chuckle as my insides gurgle and my vision blurs
my head sways but i press it up high
my nose sticking in the air sniffing out more
i drop the bottle and i lick my mouth
i hear it smash
look down quickly
throw up a little
but i manage to lick the last remains out of the bottle
i burp and i supress a giggle
i feel so jolly
and i feel like im rolling instead of walking
my feet heavy but easy to lift side to side
i stagger inside up the stairs
and calapse onto the floor
i can hear voises
'shes drunk...look at the state of her!'
my eyes squinted and my hands outstrenched
i lift myself up and moan
'im nof drunk im a bitsy tipsy'
and i throw up...
i wake the next day head ache banging
and asprin flowing
the next time i dont think i'll get as 'tipsy' as i did last night!
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Re: tipsy
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by pixie on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 01:17:56 PM AEST
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good write, i know of this feeling too well lolol
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Re: tipsy
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:12:37 PM AEST
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| Did she have to barf??? Nice fun read. |
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