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-My Mirror-
Contributed by
starryskyez09
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:45:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I look into the mirror,
And see my sad face,
And all the years of fears I've seen,
Show on this sad face.
My eyes are dull,
No longer shiny,
For with all the worries my life faces,
I don't see things happy no more.
My smile no longer exsits,
Just a frown that stays the same,
For all the yelling thats been done,
Why should I smile anymore?
My face is very pale,
It's no longer a color,
For all the beatings that I've taken,
My face shows them all.
And now I turn from the mirror,
Sit down and start to cry,
Because when I look in the mirror only I see this,
And the world chooses not to.
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starryskyez09
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2004-08-16 12:45:54]
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Re: -My Mirror-
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by kyletycz on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 06:14:19 PM AEST
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hey, nice write, i liked this poem alot, just dont wory about what other people see, it seems like i see things differently from the rest of the world, but sometimes it not them that chooses not to see it, its you who refuses to see things in their light, i finnally have begun looking at things from anothers perspective, and i think my life is getting better now, so i wish you the best of luck
l8r
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Re: -My Mirror-
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by Drapes on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 10:58:54 AM AEST
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Wow, nice write and I know very much how you feel =( Best wishes,
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