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Midas Touch
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:44:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You have the midas touch,
You’ve given me what I needed so much,
My whole world is filled with gold,
Except this precious metal isn’t to be sold.
I will keep the treasures you have given,
This love of ours which was once forbidden,
The fruits of our love are now so ready,
As you hold me I feel so steady.
Planets collide & worlds may fall,
But when I’ve got you I’ve got it all,
Nothing on earth has felt so right,
The passion we hold still burns so bright.
My whole body is your sacred temple,
My rivers of rapture are brimming full,
Will you ease my need for the cardinal sin,
Make me forget where you start & I begin.
A touch like yours is a phenomenon,
It keeps my desires blazing so strong,
It amazes me the powers in which you possess,
As you lay my naked body down to rest.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-08-16 12:44:09]
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Re: Midas Touch
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:50:54 PM AEST
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A very pleasant write and read. Well done pixie !!
I like that ... " ease my need for the cardinal sin "
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Re: Midas Touch
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by Overstated on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:57:00 PM AEST
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| a very open heartfelt piece - towards the end it felt very 'romantic'... I thought this was a very intelligent happy poem :) ! |
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Re: Midas Touch
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by jeannoh on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:04:18 AM AEST
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Isn't Love grand!
A very nice poem
I really enjoy your work
thank you for shareing it!
Jeannoh |
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