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-Invisible-
Contributed by
starryskyez09
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:24:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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As I slip into the darkness,
The world seems to get colder,
As I take each step,
I turn more invisible.
No-one seems to care,
For what I do or say,
Im just another human to this world,
Trying to live my life from day to day.
I wish that I could show myself,
Show the world who I really am,
But Im afraid that if I try to,
I'll become invisible again.
So I'll just keep on walking towards my destination,
And maybe on day I'll reach it,
And no longer be invisible.
Copyright ©
starryskyez09
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2004-08-16 12:24:44]
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Re: -Invisible-
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by inertia on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 12:43:04 PM AEST
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| i often feel invisibe or dead t the world so, it was really easy for me to get into this poem. howver, for somone who may not know the feeling i think you could deliver it differently, make t flow a little more. i'm not knocking on your work, i like it. thanks |
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Re: -Invisible-
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by kyletycz on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 06:17:10 PM AEST
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good poem, i think the thing that scares me the most in life is when i die, if nobody noticed, and thus i feel like i walk through life trying my best to make an impression, but even though i doubt my biggest fear will happen, it still scares me, but i do my best to aviod it, nice write
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Re: -Invisible-
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by jeannoh on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:00:06 AM AEST
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I can relate to this poem
For many years in life I felt that way.
Your feelings shared that is a definate step
shareing your poems with the world is a Wonderful way to be seen!...I love your work please keep writing..,,,thank you so much
Jeannoh |
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Re: -Invisible-
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by flamingblade on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 07:29:12 PM AEST
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it's like you are talking about me!so true!
So good expressing! |
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