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I could have...
Contributed by
Icequeen
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:16:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Those eyes I could have drowned in
Their depths unimaginable, unfathomable.
I could have lost myself in their dark and
Seductive promise, their animal innocence,
Their brown black infinite pools.
I could have exclaimed over the
Smoothness of his skin, silken, satin rich
That made you want to touch him and in doing so,
Run your hands over him, revelling in the
Sense of touching, feeling.
I could have felt that steel within,
Hidden beneath the guileless baby
Soft skin.
Iron hard, titanium strong, muscles tensing
In gorgeous uncertainty, begging to be felt,
To be marvelled at: to be wanted.
I could have…
Amy Pluess ©2003
Copyright ©
Icequeen
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2004-08-16 11:16:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I could have...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stellar on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:42:13 AM AEST (User
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Wow. Very alluring.
Great write! |
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Re: I could have...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nazmythian on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:54:24 AM AEST (User
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Oh Wow !!! Adonis himself would be trembling at your feet to have had such beautiful words bestowed upon him. A fabulous write !!
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: I could have...
(User Rating: 1 ) by theMoth on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 08:10:47 PM AEST (User
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Whoa, momma. Hot stuff. Call me.--Mothy |
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Re: I could have...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lizz on
Wednesday, 29th April 2009 @ 07:20:49 PM AEST (User
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this poem is so true
i could have also....
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