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True Love
Contributed by
Nnenna
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:10:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As I look in your eyes,
What is it I see,
Someone intelligent and sexy
A man who loves me.
Always I think about,
The days when their was no us,
When we were both too shy to come together,
To make this minus a plus.
The feeling I have when I'm with you,
Makes my heart melt inside,
And when away from my one true love,
My heart tends to hide.
If your feeling down,
If your feeling blue,
Call on your one and only love,
Because I found love to be true.
Copyright ©
Nnenna
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2004-08-16 11:10:14]
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Re: True Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ms_superior on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:21:32 AM AEST
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| I'm so proud of your for letting go of all that in your last poems. You are an interesting writing with great potentilal. |
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Re: True Love
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by Stellar on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 11:33:07 AM AEST
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| This sounds a lot like my boyfriend and I. LOL we were too shy to get together, but once we did, we found the loves of our lives. This is a very sweet poem. Keep it up! |
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