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Thankyou
Contributed by
janny
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 06:52:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I was left brokenhearted,
Thought it would never mend,
Then it came,
The call that could do it,
I was so happy,
Over the months to come,
I could feel it starting to mend,
Then on the day,
I felt a rush of True Love,
You were here in my arms,
To love and to hold,
Your my shining star,
The star that mended my heart,
Thankyou my darling Ebony.
Copyright ©
janny
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2004-08-16 06:52:13]
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Re: Thankyou
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 07:46:23 AM AEST
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this was really great, a sad yet happy poem, it was very well written, and the form was okay
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Re: Thankyou
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by Sharon on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 08:00:00 AM AEST
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| Beautiful...To go from such heartache to finding something so beautiful.Love it ,well done. |
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