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Epiphany
Contributed by
Archie
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 04:19:48 AM in AEST
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I keep turning my back on reality
fighting against consequences,
drugging the pain that keeps hurting me
boxing my bad circumstances.
They keep coming out; they keep on haunting me
taking away all my chances
to dream, to love, to live life with hope from my heart.
And I keep wondering
is this the beginning of the ending
and I keep wondering
when true love is going to find me
I keep having this epiphany
seeing the time of my fall
I filght, I claw but it just does no good
You don't know the pain in my heart
so don't you dare
try to comfort me
Life is just a shot in the dark
but theres a chance
to find some light within the dark
If I am free of you
You broke my heart
I must be free of you
This is my epiphany
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-08-16 04:19:48]
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Re: Epiphany
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 04:51:37 AM AEST
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"Life is just a shot in the dark....to find some light within the dark"..what a nice line!..
welldone..total poem is very good. venkat
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Re: Epiphany
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 08:44:54 AM AEST
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A heatfelt emotional poem Archie so sad.
A wonderful write
You will find the happiness you desire one day for one day the mist will clear and your heart will flow with joy
Love SweetAngelukxxxx |
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Re: Epiphany
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by Bones on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 06:27:36 PM AEST
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| Heeey...lol...I saw this in your lists of poems...and I had to comment lol...=P...=^.^=...once again...5/5...did you see my comment on 'Epiphany' in your journal? anyways...you'll see more comments from me on some of your other poems. =D...if you read any of my other poems...don't read many of the older ones...I just like my latest better...wait...I'm off subject...=P...well...keep kickin butt! Take care, my friend. |
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Re: Epiphany
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by waos on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 11:52:09 PM AEST
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| that was really good i thought. i like the end of it |
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Re: Epiphany
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 01:34:18 AM AEST
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Meaningful and compelling, and worded just right. I've been missing out on your poetry lately, with the rapid currents of life around here, but I am glad to get back into it.
Bravo!
Andrew |
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Re: Epiphany
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 03:52:19 PM AEST
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Excellent write.
I recommended Yousef
check
you out some.
You have a lot of
good poems, man.
--Mothy |
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