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For A Little While
Contributed by
AndreaJ
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 04:11:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Green, pink, blue
White, A little piece of heaven.
Swallow.......
Swallow......
Swallow my pain.
Color my world.
Take me from reality.
Dizzy, giggle, color,
beautiful, all muscles relaxed.
Take my pain.
Take my stress.
Take my experiences.
Take me from reality....
Even if just for a little while.
Grey, sadness, dispair,
Depressed, sleep is the only escape.
I need more to take my pain.
I need more to color my world.
I need more to take me from reality........
even if just....... for......
A little while.
Copyright ©
AndreaJ
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2004-08-16 04:11:13]
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Re: For A Little While
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by unforgiven on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 04:58:11 AM AEST
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| i love how ur poem starts out on the lighter side with all of the colours and the laughter and then slowly changes into the grey with the bleakness and despair. to show this change so effectively helps the understanding behind the poem......i love it!!! |
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Re: For A Little While
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by Alina on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 01:34:27 PM AEST
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This had an unspoken depth!! Reminds me of my "lovely" friend Ecstasy. Keep up the good work.
ALINA |
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