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Anxiety
Contributed by
ReapersAdvocate
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Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 02:15:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I long to see her gorgeous face
I long to feel her sweet embrace
I long to go where flowers grow
With her, far away from this place
With her, I will find eternal bliss
When I recieve her honeyed kiss
Then I believe that we will leave
To a place where nothing goes amiss
An open plain with a golden gate
Where beyond a cottage lies in wait
A simple place with wide open space
Where the world no longer bears its weight
But I am myself, and she is she
Together we can never be
All because she is mortality
Yet I wait for her in anxiety.
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Re: Anxiety
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:17:48 AM AEST
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Well, I wouldn't call it scratch.
It's a beautifull masterpeice.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Anxiety
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by inertia on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 03:56:03 AM AEST
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| good message, good imagery, the rhythm gets a little stagnant but, overall i do like it. actually i can tell you're tired...lol...good work man. thanks |
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Re: Anxiety
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 02:52:38 AM AEST
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It's lovely.....
Jenni |
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