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My blood on your lips
Contributed by
silverjade
on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 10:12:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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what is beautiful
deep dark red
slowly flowing down ur mouth,
i picked up the drop
slowly placed it in my mouth
the sweet nectar
that courses through my veins
sweet venom
you have drank from me today
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silverjade
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2004-08-15 22:12:05]
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Re: My blood on your lips
(User Rating: 1 )
by waos on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 10:45:22 PM AEST
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| that was really good. i like that a lot. totally suits dark poetry and you did an awesome job of it. short but .. just real expressive. |
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Re: My blood on your lips
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by waos on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 10:45:23 PM AEST
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| that was really good. i like that a lot. totally suits dark poetry and you did an awesome job of it. short but .. just real expressive. |
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Re: My blood on your lips
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by TheRaven on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 07:07:40 PM AEST
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wow...love the symbolic meanings...great job keep it up.
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