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Love Hurts
Contributed by
Nnenna
on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 09:27:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I should have thought about the word love,
Before I fell so hard,
Now I'm in pain missing you,
And now I see you were untrue.
It was kind of foolish of me to believe your words,
But looking in your eyes it seemed so real.
Why would you do this to me?
This is not how my heart should feel.
I gave you my love and life,
You were my only man.
Now that I see you with her,
And the tears just start to flow.
See now I realize I was nothing to you,
But to me you were my all,
My love, my care, and my affection,
I discovered, was my downfall.
Copyright ©
Nnenna
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2004-08-15 21:27:09]
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Re: Love Hurts
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by Ms_superior on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 09:30:08 PM AEST
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| Dang girl. You in some serious pain. i love the parallell structure of your poem. it has such a nice "mean" flow |
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Re: Love Hurts
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by waos on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 09:47:06 PM AEST
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| I totally know how you feel, you described it good. That seems to be how it goes, even if we think that "he" was one of the good ones. Just doesn't seem to turn out the way we want it to. Good job writing it. |
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