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Realise Reality
Contributed by
Ripper_Something_Unusual
on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 05:03:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Break the already cracked waves of dawn,
Festering skin on the side of a pallet knife,
Maggots try to eat me,
A poisonous side dish to an cannibal dinner party,
This is life,
A washed up ball of hope.
Tighten the hangmans noose,
He cant do it anymore,
Hes hanging from it himself.
This is what the world drives people like us to,
But theyre too blind to see what to do,
What a society we live in.
Full speed ahead,
Tell my family goodbye,
Hope this windsheild isnt reinforced,
This is my fault,
I never look at the consequences,
I never realise reality till its too late.
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Re: Realise Reality
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by 01_zanzebar on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 05:18:19 PM AEST
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another mental triumph ripper, its great how your lines are having such descriptive similies now, check out R@ygold if ya want (its 19 poems long mind) lol
well done
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Re: Realise Reality
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by Nazmythian on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 05:27:56 PM AEST
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The imagery is excellent. Especially like the lines ..."Tighten the hangmans noose,
He cant do it anymore,
Hes hanging from it himself. "
Great Write !!
Nazmythian ~
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Re: Realise Reality
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by HellsLibrarian on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 05:33:46 PM AEST
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| How sad. very gripping. |
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