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One More Day
Contributed by
nazmythian
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Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 04:49:16 PM in AEST
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Lead weights crack
Agonizingly slow, they separate imperceptively
Painfully, light penetrates the void
Conciousness wraps tentative tendrils around
Fleeting, half remembered images
Elusive, they evade and fade, returning
To the Darkness
Desparate Demons depart screaming
I will not be theirs this day
My lease on life has been renewed
I awake
Breathing deeply
I arise
I live again
If only for today
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Re: One More Day
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 06:30:40 PM AEST
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| wow. Very deep. VERY good write. |
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Re: One More Day
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by veramouse on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 02:38:07 AM AEST
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| to awaken is a bonus, sometimes dreams are scary.... |
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Re: One More Day
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:01:37 AM AEST
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Excellent, excellent writing my friend.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: One More Day
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 02:59:55 PM AEST
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Mon cher ami, this is VERY profound... Surreal, anguish, defiance... Very strong and clenches the heart with an iron fist! Beautiful words.
"Desparate Demons depart screaming
I will not be theirs this day
My lease on life has been renewed
I awake
Breathing deeply
I arise
I live again
If only for today..."
I LOVE this part! I can relate to this very much. You speak of such pain, and yet, you try to fight it, beating it down... You have won this battle. However, there is tomorrow... Vivid images are being painted into my mind; emotions lunging at me from this exquisite write... Most inspiring! I thank you for sharing this piece with us, dearest Naz!! All my love! Pour toujours vôtre,
Fleur de souffrance. |
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Re: One More Day
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 07:14:10 PM AEST
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Wow. Reading this, I remembered why
I love your stuff so much. Bravo Naz. This
is excellent! You are wonderfully
descriptive, my friend.
~Breezy |
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