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heaven sounds poo
Contributed by
paula_kay23
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Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 04:46:49 PM in AEST
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life is hell, death is heaven
so i have been told
if this really is the case
i dread the day i'm old
lets say for arguments sake
heaven is just peacefull
angels all being kind to each other
even when they've had a skin full
sitting on clouds day after day
fluffing up their wings
too perfect in every way
to fluff up other things
all this for an eternity
being pure as driven snow
never once doing wrong
never ever being low
fair enough, thats not hell
but heaven it surely aint
no people to be annoyed with?
no reputation to taint?
theres more to life down here
eventhough it may be tough
bad times, good times, whatever
i just cant get enough
'cause with the bad comes the good
which cancells the bad out
that frown, that smile upon your face
yeah thats what life's about
so when you're down and you want out
think the way i do
i'd rather be in hell forever
'cause heaven just sounds poo
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Re: heaven sounds poo
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 09:06:20 PM AEST
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This reminded me of something I used to say as a kid...lol....I hadn't thought of it in ages..lmao.. I used to say if others could endure Hell then I could also..... and so I convinced myself I didnt have to be good all the time..lmao..
sorry.....got carried away here...
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Re: heaven sounds poo
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 07:27:49 PM AEST
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Good one. Bravo You tell it like it is.:-) I enjoyed that .It was funny
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Re: heaven sounds poo
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:31:39 PM AEST
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Very good write...But I would not want to live in hell and die and go to hell..Just my thinking..lol
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